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Patrick has finished his essay. He’s conducting a research on Virtual Reality focusing on Google Glass. He’s actually has chosen a good topic; however his essay mostly contains about general information about the topic, not the technical stuff as required in Computer Science EE.

Widha has finished her essay. There are some research and experiments in her essay body, which is clearly explained and documented. However, throughout her essay, there are some mistaken used words and the technical explanation is not too deep.

Winson has finished his essay. His research is about SQL Injection related with computer security issues. He has explained in details for doing the injection and ways to prevent it. Overall, his essay is good, containing detail explanation about the topic.

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